Warrior Princess

Oh my gosh. That was amazing. I have felt like the person in this poem only once in my life, and this is so much like that time that I ...

This was a beautiful poem, with amazing, sensual imagery. I must say I didn't prefer the "immortal portal" line--the words are cool but the rhyme sounds kind of cheesy--but overall ...

First, let me say that you have my sympathy. When I read this, it was like you were looking into my eyes, straight into my mind, and reading what you ...

Whoa...that was actually really good. Short as the public's honeymoon with Obama, but good as a shoulder to cry on. (I know what I just said made no sense at ...

Uh....*clears throat* Yeah, I mean, what was that all about? I'm afraid I didn't get it at all. Still, I'm not going to say that's a bad thing. It's called ...

Yo sista!! Warrior Princess to the rescue on her coal-black steed lol. Well other ppl can critique if they wish; I on the other hand will give an incredibly shallow ...

Haha, this was GREAT!!!!!!!!! Nothing but praise for this play. I love the way you poke fun at some of the rather absurd aspects of New Moon, and you maintain ...

This was HILARIOUS!!!!!!! I loved it!!!!! It actually sounds like something I wrote once, just with different characters (long story). It was very random; that and the fast pace, banter, ...

This poem is very good, it has a sort of wistful but resigned mood. Trust me, I have crushed seriously on so many guys it's hard to count them all. ...

Yay!!!! A fellow Christian!!! That was a good poem, though fairly simplified. You could have put in a little more about what it means to be a Christian, but these ...

I'll probably only be saying things that every one else has already said, but oh well. The poem is definitely original, with thought-provoking subject matter. I like how the rhyme ...

I will tell you a story. One day a girl named Warrior Princess came up to a girl named cheri1706. "Well, I've got some good news and some bad news," ...

This poem was okay, nothing spectacular, but a start. (I see you're a newbie--welcome to this neurotic website of terror!) Overall I dpn't think it's very clear; you never really ...

This is a really good poem, and very expressive. The "lost love" theme is particularly resonating for me, since I have only very recently been torn ruthlessly away from the ...

Wow, this story is imaginative and wacky--even I, who am fifteen and fond of Shakespeare and Dickens, loved it! It was very creative for you to use a dog as ...